Monday, June 20, 2011

Monday's Poems

Obedient
By: Shel Silverstein

Teacher said, "You don't obey.
You fidget and twidget
And won't sit down.
So go stand in the corner now
'Til I say you can turn around."
So there I stood 'til it got dark
Without a whimper or a tear,
'Til everybody else went home.
I guess that she forgot me here.
And that was Friday, so I stayed
All through the weekend--bein' good,
And Monday was the first day of
Summer vacation, so I stood
Through hot July and sticky August,
Tryin' to obey her rule.
Stood right there until September,
When--yikes--they closed down the school!
Boarded up the doors and windows,
Moved to a new one way' cross town.
So here I've stood for forty years
In dark and dust and creaky sounds,
Waiting for her to say, "Turn around."

This might not be just what she meant,
But me--I'm so obedient.


What do you think about this? =)








5 comments:

welcome to my world of poetry said...

Love the poem. great to read.

Yvonne.

Stephanie said...

Great poem. Shel Silverstein captured childhood beautifully in his poems.

N. R. Williams said...

Scary thought. I think I'd need to go pee.
Mom

Susan Flett Swiderski said...

Silverstein's poetry is awesome. I wasn't familiar with this one, so thanks for posting it. And I'm with Mom ... when ya gotta go, ya gotta go!

Summer Ross said...

"In dark and dust and creaky sounds"

This is a wonderful line!